umbralillium: (Charlie/Colby so adorkable)
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The boys got a little domestic, and then a little smutty on me. o_o;;

Author: DaniKitten [livejournal.com profile] dollydani
Title: Observations
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Charlie/Colby
Rating: NC-17
Feedback: always welcome
Concrit: in comments
Disclaimer: Sadly, Charlie and Colby are not mine. If they were, they'd spend the day in bed and to hell with work and math. XD
Warnings/Squicks: M/M slash
Summary: Colby watches Charlie some more. He likes to do that.
Notes: Just a bit of randomosity that popped into my head while I was waiting for Criminal Minds to start (And it ended up being a repeat anyway! *pouts*)

Colby was seated on his living room couch, files and paperwork from the latest case spread out on the coffee table in front of him, but his attention wasn't focused on the reams of information. It was centered on the man currently sprawled out on his stomach on the floor on the other side of the coffee table.

Charlie had come over to spend some time with Colby, away from work and math equations. However, the stress of midterms and the grueling case they had recently solved, which was the source of the files and paperwork on Colby's coffee table, had combined to make sure Charlie had spent many late nights at the office over the last week, and so, Charlie had conked out on the floor only ten minutes after arriving, some thirty minutes before.

With a fond smile, Colby stood, walked around the table, and settled on the floor next to Charlie, his green eyes wandering over his lover's recumbent form. Charlie had toed off his shoes almost as soon as he had walked in the door, his jeans were obviously a favorite pair since they had been washed so many times, they were as soft as a fleece blanket and there was more than one hole in them. One such hole was along the inner thigh of Charlie's left pant-leg, offering a tantalizing view of soft, smooth skin, which had been quite the distraction for Colby over the last half hour. Colby tore his eyes away from the hole and continued upwards.

Charlie had his head pillowed on his crossed arms, causing his pale blue t-shirt to ride up near his waist, baring a thin strip of tanned skin to Colby's appreciative gaze. Once again, Colby had to force his eyes away from bare skin and moved up to Charlie's tumbled curls. Colby sighed with appreciation as he recalled running his fingers through the silky-soft, freshly-washed, product-free hair the last time Charlie had come over.

Colby had learned early on in their relationship that Charlie loved to have Colby run his fingers through the dark brown strands, even becoming aroused by it on more than one occasion. So it wasn't unusual for Colby to begin their 'meetings' by playing with Charlie's hair.

His knowledge of Charlie's sensitivity helped Colby decide how he was going to wake his lover. So, after shifting position so that he was near Charlie's head, Colby reached out and started petting Charlie.

After a few moments, Charlie shifted slightly, a slight smile gracing his lips. "I was wondering when you'd stop looking and start doing."

Colby grinned as Charlie's lashes fluttered, then finally opened, squinting slightly in the bright sunlight that filtered through the open windows. "And I was wondering when you would stop pretending you were asleep."

"Uh-huh." Charlie laughed and rolled onto his back towards Colby, his shoulder pressed against Colby's thigh. With a wide yawn, he arched his back in a stretch, making his shirt ride up even farther.

Colby's eyes traced over his lover's lean form, his mind providing the details that were covered by Charlie's shirt: small brown-pink nipples topped a sleekly muscled chest, the sparse hairs between Charlie's leanly muscled pectorals trailed down to join the thicker thatch of hair that came up from Charlie's groin.

Once Colby's hungry gaze reached the waistband of Charlie's jeans, they traced back up to meet Charlie's amused brown eyes. Colby smiled softly and leaned down to press his lips to Charlie's, one hand braced next to Charlie's shoulder, the other cupping the back Charlie's neck. When Colby's tongue probed the seam of his lops, Charlie eagerly parted them, allowing Colby's tongue access to his welcoming mouth.

Charlie moaned softly as Colby shifted to lie over him, their matching erections pressed together through layers of denim and cotton, delighting in the weight pressing him into the floor. Charlie wrapped his arms around Colby's neck, pulling him even closer until they were matched from lips to toes.

Colby pulled away for a moment to free both their erections, then leaned back down took Charlie's lips in another heated kiss, thrusting his hips against Charlie's. Charlie's resultant groan was swallowed by Colby's tongue.

The lovers moved together, neither one wanting to hurry their climax, merely reveling in the feeling of moving against the other. Hands delved under t-shirts to caress warm, moist skin, moans and mewls of pleasure were swallowed by eager mouths.

Charlie tore his mouth away from Colby's when probing fingers found a particularly sensitive spot. Colby smiled and lowered his mouth to lick and suck at Charlie's neck raising a passion mark.

"Colby." Colby groaned as Charlie's passion-rough voice sounded in his ear. "Almost..."

"Yeah." Colby whispered in reply, feeling the pleasure building deep within as he neared the edge, thrusting faster against Charlie, wanting to bring his lover over the edge with him.

"COLBY!" Charlie cried as he came, his seed spilling between their tightly pressed bodies, his pleasure increasing as he felt and heard Colby climax moments later, his own seed joining Charlie's in easing the last few thrusts.

Eventually, the two men lay still, arms and legs still entangled as they caught their breath.

Once he'd composed himself somewhat, Colby moved to ease his weight from on top of Charlie, but Charlie only held him tighter, so Colby smiled fondly and settled atop his lover once more, pressing a soft kiss to Charlie's throat.

Moments later, both men were asleep, their chests moving in synchronization, and, if one had hearing sensitive enough, they would have heard two hearts beating as one in the otherwise silent apartment.

End.

Date: 2005-10-27 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asesinos.livejournal.com
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! *fangirls* This? Is AMAZING.

Side note: I too was disappointed at the re-run status of Criminal Minds. I love that show, I didn't know you watched it too!

Date: 2005-10-27 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*blushes and smiles* I was rather amazed at it myself. I just let my fingers go and that's what came out.

*falls off chair laughing* It seems we have quite a few shows in common. How bizarre is that?

Date: 2005-10-27 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asesinos.livejournal.com
You're a genius. ACK! I think I might need to read it again, hehehe.

Oh, it's crazy-bizarre. I don't know how we ended up being so similar! But I like it. :D

Date: 2005-10-27 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
Yesss, read again! HEE!

I know! I told my sister we must share a brain, we're so much alike.

Date: 2005-10-27 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asesinos.livejournal.com
I think we do share a brain... and yeah, I read it again. And again. And... again. :P

Date: 2005-10-27 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
We totally do. XD *cackles with glee* You're addicted.

Date: 2005-10-27 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asesinos.livejournal.com
I really am addicted. Guh. Now I need to read it again(!!!).

Date: 2005-10-28 08:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
Y'know, the fact that I got you addicted to my story really made my day, and is even making me smile despite how crappy I feel right now. Thank you. *hugs*

Date: 2005-10-28 11:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asesinos.livejournal.com
Awww, feel better. And I'm really, really addicted!

Date: 2005-10-27 06:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] neverbelonged.livejournal.com
guh! this... if one had hearing sensitive enough, they would have heard two hearts beating as one in the otherwise silent apartment. is just so perfect. i loved the whole thing. you have offically dragged me into a new pairing (and there are oh so many for this fandom) loved it... rec'ing it. great job.

Date: 2005-10-27 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*cackles with glee* WoOt! My work here is done. XD I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And, wow, I've never be rec'd before. *blushes and smiles* Thank you!

Date: 2005-10-27 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bessytheevilcow.livejournal.com
excellent story love colby (even though we dont know much about him) and love charlie so together...*evil grin* but any ways good job write more and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Date: 2005-10-27 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
I think that's why I enjoy writing Colby so much; there's so much we don't know, so there's an infinite number possibilities. Thank you! The way things are going with these two, I'm almost positive there will be more.

Date: 2005-10-27 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
Okay I cave in - Colby is great! With Charlie. In your fics. The jury's still out as his part in the show lol

But seriously, this is the second time I find myself loving a story where he's involved - you certainly know how to write the guy! I love the Colby/Charlie dynamic, they're so hot together and Colby is so sweet towards Charlie... they're both playful and just plain sexy. Congrats lol

Date: 2005-10-28 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*blush* Thank you! I'm glad you like my Colby. I can't wait for tonight's episode. XD

The way I see it, if a couple can't be playful together, they have no business being a couple. ;D Thanks for the review!

Date: 2005-10-28 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
I'm afraid there's no new episode tonight - due to baseball or something?

Date: 2005-10-28 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*gasp!* I didn't know that! *sobs* Okay, I'm over it. I don't really remember the episode they're supposed to show. I'll just have to watch it again! XD

Date: 2005-10-28 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cat-willow.livejournal.com
I'm not sure if Colby's actually gaining IQ points while he's with Charlie, or if you're just writing him *so dang good*!

Such a cute, unexpected, *hot* couple!

Date: 2005-10-28 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*laughs* I think I'll go with the first option, if only to be able to walk out of my room without my head getting stuck in the door. XD

Hee! Thank you!

Date: 2005-10-28 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denied-heaven.livejournal.com
awww
i adored that!
i really do need to watch the dang show lol
so sweet, they are *sigh*

Date: 2005-10-28 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*rubs hands together and cackles with glee* I'll get you addicted to Numb3rs one of these days! They really need to put the first season out on DVD. *nods decisively*

*smiles* Thank you! I think I have a tendency to write sweet couples for the most part. It's very rare for me to write something dark.

Date: 2005-10-29 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaderosefox.livejournal.com
And again with the Oh My comment this time with a side order of Awwwwwww. *grin* That was so cute. I could get used to this pair if you keep writing stuff like this. Usually my evil little mind says: "But Charlie and Larry are so insych anyway. That if they aren't a couple then someone's not writing them right." You know you're to much of a Slasher when the TV show gives you a perfectly good, cute couple and you watch them and say: "Nope. Never happen. He'd be much happier with another guy." *grin*

Jaderose

Date: 2005-10-29 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*laughs* Well, I started out as a Larry/Charlie, and most of the Numb3rs slash that I read is Larry/Charlie, since there isn't much of a Charlie/Colby fanbase yet. But yeah, no bunnies were forthcoming for Larry/Charlie, mostly because I see them as having a lot of intellectual discussions and I'm better at the arts than I am at the sciences, so yeah, Larry/Charlie is out of the running for me writing them. Doesn't preclude others' fics though. XD

As to Charlie/Colby, the moment in Charlie's office a couple weeks ago got me to thinking, then I mentioned it to an LJ friend of mine, and we both got to thinking, then the bunnies showed up and bit me hard and don't appear to be leaving me alone so there is a distinct possibility of more Charlie/Colby fic in the future.

Thanks for the review!

And geez, I'm my inner Xander is getting quite the workout tonight. *blush*

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