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umbralilliumTitle: Enjoying the Show
Author: DaniKitten (![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
dollydani)
Fandom and Pairing: Numb3rs, Charlie Eppes/Colby Granger
Rating: NC-17
Claim: 'Watch'
Prompt: PWP
Warnings: graphic M/M slash
Notes: I originally started this a couple weeks ago, but I'm still a little green when it comes to pr0n, so I got stuck for a little while. Finally finished it this afternoon. Spoilers for 2x7, 'Convergence.'
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Previous Stories: Part of my Watching You 'verse.
Summary: Charlie shows up at Colby's apartment.
Enjoying the Show
Colby opened his front door to find a scowling Charlie on the other side. “Hey, Charlie, come on in.” Colby invited as he stepped aside, pushing the door open a little further.
“You taunted me today.” Charlie accused as he brushed past Colby.
Colby waited until the door was closed before replying. “Taunted? No, no, that was not taunting. Taunting would have been, ‘oooh, he’s got you there, Charlie,’ or ‘he has a point.’”
Charlie crossed his arms. “Then what would you call, ‘oooh, math fight’?”
“Um,” Colby paused, frantically searching for an answer that would mollify Charlie. “Enjoying the show?” He offered then winced as Charlie’s scowl deepened. ‘Right. Plan B.’ Colby thought, moving forward to stand in front of Charlie. “Plus,” He moved into Charlie’s personal space, until their hips were less than an inch apart. “You are so hot when you’re angry.” Colby finished, not moving any closer or farther away, just waiting.
Charlie’s eyes flicked back and forth between Colby’s lips and his mischievous green eyes. “Are you trying to distract me, Agent Granger?” Charlie asked, a trifle breathlessly.
Colby grinned. “Maybe. Is it working, Professor Eppes?”
“Hell, yes,” Charlie muttered as he closed the remaining distance and capture Colby’s lips in a searing kiss.
Colby quickly gained control of the kiss, his tongue mapping the contours of Charlie’s mouth possessively.
When they finally broke the kiss, both men were panting. “I played the Amita card a little too strongly, didn’t I?” Charlie gasped out sheepishly.
Colby growled softly before kissing Charlie again. Moments later, Colby trailed kisses from Charlie’s mouth to his ear and nibbled gently on the lobe.
“God, yes,” Charlie moaned. “How do you, oh god, always seem to, yes! Know what to do, mmmm, right there, to me?” Charlie managed to gasp between moans.
“Because you’re mine,” Colby whispered in Charlie’s ear, grabbing the edges of Charlie’s over-shirt and towing him towards the bedroom.
Colby quickly stripped first Charlie then himself, aware of Charlie’s heated gaze the entire time. Colby gently pushed Charlie down onto the bed, following him down until they were both sprawled out on the soft sheets. Colby continued his ministrations from where he had left off in the living room and trailed kisses from Charlie’s ear down to his collarbone, then across to the hollow of Charlie’s throat.
Charlie moaned as those wicked lips caressed his skin and worked their way down to his nipples. Colby nipped gently at the small nub then kissed his way over to the other one. Next, Colby moved down Charlie’s stomach, pausing for a moment to dip his tongue in Charlie’s navel then continued on to his prize.
Charlie panted and writhed under Colby’s gentle attention, crying out when Colby’s lips wrapped around the head of his cock.
Colby grabbed Charlie’s hips, pinning him to the bed, and took Charlie’s cock deep into his throat, his tongue playing along the vein on the underside. His eyes drifted up to see Charlie’s head thrown back against the pillow and his hands clutching the sheets. Colby moaned softly as he thought, ‘I did this, I’m the one giving him so much pleasure.’
Charlie cried out at the added stimulus. “God! Colby!”
Colby released one of Charlie’s hips and sucked his index finger along with Charlie’s cock until the finger was wet then he trailed it down to Charlie’s hole and pressed in gently.
Charlie’s head thrashed against the pillow as pleasure flowed through him scattering his thoughts. “More.” He whimpered, pressing down against Colby’s finger.
Colby pulled back until just the head of Charlie’s cock was between his lips, his tongue dipping into the slit to lap up Charlie’s precome. He pressed his finger in further, searching for Charlie’s prostate. He smiled as well as he could when he found it, causing Charlie’s hips to thrust up sharply.
“Yes!” Charlie cried as sparks flashed behind his eyes. He forced them open and looked down, meeting Colby’s smoldering eyes. That look and the pleasure pushed Charlie over the edge and he came, Colby’s name tumbling from his lips.
Colby swallowed Charlie’s seed, humming softly with pleasure. He gently laved Charlie’s cock clean before moving up the bed to hold Charlie as he came down from his orgasm.
Charlie curled into Colby’s strong body as his breathing and heart slowed back to normal. Charlie smiled contentedly against Colby’s shoulder, the index finger of his left hand drawing seemingly random patterns on Colby’s chest.
Colby carded his fingers through Charlie’s hair, content to simply hold him for a little while. Charlie’s finger distracted him, however. “Charlie?”
“Hmm?” Charlie murmured absentmindedly.
“Are you doing math on me?” Colby asked, humor coloring his tone.
Charlie smiled sheepishly, consciously stilling his movements. “Maybe,”
Colby chuckled softly and reached to tilt Charlie’s head up. “Never change, Charlie,” He whispered, pressing a soft kiss to Charlie’s forehead.
Charlie’s embarrassment eased and he trailed his hand down Colby’s body to his hard cock. “My turn to be distracting,”
Colby’s answering chuckle was interrupted by a moan as Charlie’s hand closed around his erection. “Distract away,”
Charlie fisted Colby’s cock hard enough to give pleasure, but not enough to bring Colby to completion too quickly. He kept his chocolate eyes locked on Colby’s face as he worked, watching Colby writhe and moan with pleasure.
“Charlie,” Colby moaned. “More… please!”
Charlie sat up and shifted until he was kneeling between Colby’s spread legs, still watching Colby. He moved his hand faster and reached out with his other hand and fondled Colby’s balls.
Colby gasped and thrust into Charlie’s fist, his head thrashing against the pillow.
The hand playing with Colby’s balls drifted down and Charlie pressed one finger against Colby’s entrance. Charlie whispered, “Come for me, Colby,”
“Charlie!” Colby cried, thrusting up into Charlie’s fist as he came.
Charlie watched as Colby came down from his orgasm. When Colby’s eyes fluttered open to meet Charlie’s eyes, Charlie lifted his hand and cleaned Colby’s seed from his fingers.
Colby moaned softly. “God, Charlie,” He gasped.
Charlie smiled, leaned down, and licked Colby’s spent seed from Colby’s skin. Once Colby was clean, Charlie crawled up Colby’s supine form and kissed him voraciously.
Colby moaned softly as he tasted himself in Charlie’s mouth. Their tongues danced from mouth to mouth until they had to break apart, gasping for breath. Colby reached up and pulled Charlie down until Charlie lay over him, their torsos and hips pressed together, he then wrapped his arms around Charlie’s shoulders and kissed him gently.
Charlie smiled down at Colby then shifted to lay pressed against Colby’s side, one arm across Colby’s chest and one leg atop both of Colby’s. When Colby reached up to run a hand through Charlie’s hair, he pressed back into the caress.
Colby pressed a kiss to the top of Charlie’s head. “Sleep,” He whispered softly, his own eyes drifting closed.
Charlie released a soft, contented sigh and drifted off to sleep.
End.
Author: DaniKitten (
dollydani)Fandom and Pairing: Numb3rs, Charlie Eppes/Colby Granger
Rating: NC-17
Claim: 'Watch'
Prompt: PWP
Warnings: graphic M/M slash
Notes: I originally started this a couple weeks ago, but I'm still a little green when it comes to pr0n, so I got stuck for a little while. Finally finished it this afternoon. Spoilers for 2x7, 'Convergence.'
Written for
wordclaim50Previous Stories: Part of my Watching You 'verse.
Summary: Charlie shows up at Colby's apartment.
Colby opened his front door to find a scowling Charlie on the other side. “Hey, Charlie, come on in.” Colby invited as he stepped aside, pushing the door open a little further.
“You taunted me today.” Charlie accused as he brushed past Colby.
Colby waited until the door was closed before replying. “Taunted? No, no, that was not taunting. Taunting would have been, ‘oooh, he’s got you there, Charlie,’ or ‘he has a point.’”
Charlie crossed his arms. “Then what would you call, ‘oooh, math fight’?”
“Um,” Colby paused, frantically searching for an answer that would mollify Charlie. “Enjoying the show?” He offered then winced as Charlie’s scowl deepened. ‘Right. Plan B.’ Colby thought, moving forward to stand in front of Charlie. “Plus,” He moved into Charlie’s personal space, until their hips were less than an inch apart. “You are so hot when you’re angry.” Colby finished, not moving any closer or farther away, just waiting.
Charlie’s eyes flicked back and forth between Colby’s lips and his mischievous green eyes. “Are you trying to distract me, Agent Granger?” Charlie asked, a trifle breathlessly.
Colby grinned. “Maybe. Is it working, Professor Eppes?”
“Hell, yes,” Charlie muttered as he closed the remaining distance and capture Colby’s lips in a searing kiss.
Colby quickly gained control of the kiss, his tongue mapping the contours of Charlie’s mouth possessively.
When they finally broke the kiss, both men were panting. “I played the Amita card a little too strongly, didn’t I?” Charlie gasped out sheepishly.
Colby growled softly before kissing Charlie again. Moments later, Colby trailed kisses from Charlie’s mouth to his ear and nibbled gently on the lobe.
“God, yes,” Charlie moaned. “How do you, oh god, always seem to, yes! Know what to do, mmmm, right there, to me?” Charlie managed to gasp between moans.
“Because you’re mine,” Colby whispered in Charlie’s ear, grabbing the edges of Charlie’s over-shirt and towing him towards the bedroom.
Colby quickly stripped first Charlie then himself, aware of Charlie’s heated gaze the entire time. Colby gently pushed Charlie down onto the bed, following him down until they were both sprawled out on the soft sheets. Colby continued his ministrations from where he had left off in the living room and trailed kisses from Charlie’s ear down to his collarbone, then across to the hollow of Charlie’s throat.
Charlie moaned as those wicked lips caressed his skin and worked their way down to his nipples. Colby nipped gently at the small nub then kissed his way over to the other one. Next, Colby moved down Charlie’s stomach, pausing for a moment to dip his tongue in Charlie’s navel then continued on to his prize.
Charlie panted and writhed under Colby’s gentle attention, crying out when Colby’s lips wrapped around the head of his cock.
Colby grabbed Charlie’s hips, pinning him to the bed, and took Charlie’s cock deep into his throat, his tongue playing along the vein on the underside. His eyes drifted up to see Charlie’s head thrown back against the pillow and his hands clutching the sheets. Colby moaned softly as he thought, ‘I did this, I’m the one giving him so much pleasure.’
Charlie cried out at the added stimulus. “God! Colby!”
Colby released one of Charlie’s hips and sucked his index finger along with Charlie’s cock until the finger was wet then he trailed it down to Charlie’s hole and pressed in gently.
Charlie’s head thrashed against the pillow as pleasure flowed through him scattering his thoughts. “More.” He whimpered, pressing down against Colby’s finger.
Colby pulled back until just the head of Charlie’s cock was between his lips, his tongue dipping into the slit to lap up Charlie’s precome. He pressed his finger in further, searching for Charlie’s prostate. He smiled as well as he could when he found it, causing Charlie’s hips to thrust up sharply.
“Yes!” Charlie cried as sparks flashed behind his eyes. He forced them open and looked down, meeting Colby’s smoldering eyes. That look and the pleasure pushed Charlie over the edge and he came, Colby’s name tumbling from his lips.
Colby swallowed Charlie’s seed, humming softly with pleasure. He gently laved Charlie’s cock clean before moving up the bed to hold Charlie as he came down from his orgasm.
Charlie curled into Colby’s strong body as his breathing and heart slowed back to normal. Charlie smiled contentedly against Colby’s shoulder, the index finger of his left hand drawing seemingly random patterns on Colby’s chest.
Colby carded his fingers through Charlie’s hair, content to simply hold him for a little while. Charlie’s finger distracted him, however. “Charlie?”
“Hmm?” Charlie murmured absentmindedly.
“Are you doing math on me?” Colby asked, humor coloring his tone.
Charlie smiled sheepishly, consciously stilling his movements. “Maybe,”
Colby chuckled softly and reached to tilt Charlie’s head up. “Never change, Charlie,” He whispered, pressing a soft kiss to Charlie’s forehead.
Charlie’s embarrassment eased and he trailed his hand down Colby’s body to his hard cock. “My turn to be distracting,”
Colby’s answering chuckle was interrupted by a moan as Charlie’s hand closed around his erection. “Distract away,”
Charlie fisted Colby’s cock hard enough to give pleasure, but not enough to bring Colby to completion too quickly. He kept his chocolate eyes locked on Colby’s face as he worked, watching Colby writhe and moan with pleasure.
“Charlie,” Colby moaned. “More… please!”
Charlie sat up and shifted until he was kneeling between Colby’s spread legs, still watching Colby. He moved his hand faster and reached out with his other hand and fondled Colby’s balls.
Colby gasped and thrust into Charlie’s fist, his head thrashing against the pillow.
The hand playing with Colby’s balls drifted down and Charlie pressed one finger against Colby’s entrance. Charlie whispered, “Come for me, Colby,”
“Charlie!” Colby cried, thrusting up into Charlie’s fist as he came.
Charlie watched as Colby came down from his orgasm. When Colby’s eyes fluttered open to meet Charlie’s eyes, Charlie lifted his hand and cleaned Colby’s seed from his fingers.
Colby moaned softly. “God, Charlie,” He gasped.
Charlie smiled, leaned down, and licked Colby’s spent seed from Colby’s skin. Once Colby was clean, Charlie crawled up Colby’s supine form and kissed him voraciously.
Colby moaned softly as he tasted himself in Charlie’s mouth. Their tongues danced from mouth to mouth until they had to break apart, gasping for breath. Colby reached up and pulled Charlie down until Charlie lay over him, their torsos and hips pressed together, he then wrapped his arms around Charlie’s shoulders and kissed him gently.
Charlie smiled down at Colby then shifted to lay pressed against Colby’s side, one arm across Colby’s chest and one leg atop both of Colby’s. When Colby reached up to run a hand through Charlie’s hair, he pressed back into the caress.
Colby pressed a kiss to the top of Charlie’s head. “Sleep,” He whispered softly, his own eyes drifting closed.
Charlie released a soft, contented sigh and drifted off to sleep.
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Date: 2005-12-06 03:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-12-06 03:21 am (UTC)Maybe not everything, but say, choose something like, say, the undressing, and really pay attention to detail, the texture of the clothing, the emotional sensation of becoming naked, the feel of the bodies, etc.
You begin really promisingly for that, with that "you're mine" line... but as soon as you get down (erhum) to the sex, you seem a little too concerned about what goes where, so the emotional impact of the opening was lost a little, for me.
It may be personal preference, but the best smut that I have read isn't just about the smut, it's about the love, the angst, the anger, fear of loss, whatever. You have that bookending the fic, so it's clear that you can write it really well. It's just in the physical, it kind of loses momentum for a while.
Very promising though, if that doesn't sound patronising? Okay maybe it does. What I mean is, I look forward to reading the rest of your fifty.
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Date: 2005-12-06 03:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-12-06 04:32 am (UTC)i liked this part especially,
“Are you doing math on me?” Colby asked, humor coloring his tone.
Charlie smiled sheepishly, consciously stilling his movements. “Maybe.”
Colby chuckled softly and reached to tilt Charlie’s head up. “Never change, Charlie.” He whispered, pressing a soft kiss to Charlie’s forehead.
*happy sighs*
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Date: 2005-12-06 09:11 am (UTC)Charlie and Colby are so cute together.
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Date: 2005-12-29 08:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-04 06:02 am (UTC)